C&C "Digital Painting" of a character

[The Suitor]

I'm slightly new here.  I'm mainly a writer, but  I've been making adventure games under cover.  I "painted" this to visualize one of my characters. Critique it as much as you like.


Remmington Stormarm

[Gregjazz]

You should look into how do draw proportionate faces. You can exaggerate it to make it caricaturized, but still follow basic rules of proportions.

Here's a quick example I drew in Paint: (sorry, I'm not much of an artist)

[Blue]

As Gregjazz said; you should check out some books and study how to draw a face. It will help you more on the long run.
I tried to do a quick overpaint of your drawing.


This shows you the changes I made:


I'm no expert myself when it comes to draw humans, so I'm aware that there may be flaws in it. But hopefully you can use it as a guideline or something