is my backgrounds any good?

Started by Hinders, Fri 15/08/2003 16:39:57

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Matt Brown

not too shabbey

I think you could add more to the third room. a picture prehaps? some furniture? unless its a jail of some kind...then prehaps some shackles or what have you.

I'm not too sure what it is supposed to be, prehaps you can fill us in?

the first two look pretty good though, just a tad bare.

good luck!
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Hinders

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anasazi

Not a bad start.  Here's some things to try:
The Castle Picture:
The road looks flat and weird.  It should be narrower for the perspective you're trying for.  If anyone goes into the castle, there should be a road inside.  Try adding a few bushes/clumps of grass/flowers/weeds/ivy/rocks/trees/mossy logs/flags to the scenery.  
Historical note:  Most outer walls on castles don't have large picture windows.  It's too easy for people to shoot inside.  Arrow slits meant the defenders could shoot out and the attackers had to resort to other tactics.  Like catapults.  
The . . . Dumpster? . . . Picture:
I'd probably show less ceiling, and make either the walls or the floor (or both!) a different color.  It's hard to read the dumpster, and I'm not sure whether it's like a stockroom in a gaming company (in which case there could be shelves, boxes, cd cases, and whatnot), or something else.  I like the poster.
The Guy's Room Picture:
The bed and the table need to be pulled out of the wall.  Right now they look stuck in it.  The perspective, especially on the table, seems weird, but I'm too lazy to actually draw perspective lines.  The lamp is cute - it looks like one of those oil lamps.  Like the other scenes, it seems a bit bleak.  Not very many rooms look this empty.  Where does he put his clothes?  His shoes?  His collection of comic books?  Does he have a window?  A CD collection?  A computer?  A desk?  A garbage can?  You certainly don't need all these things, but most people add something to their space to make it feel homey.  Look around at your space.
You're certainly not off to a bad start - these are backgrounds you can build off of.
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12431

these aren't bad. if you're a newbie, i'd say you're going places with this. but the bed in the last picture is far to long.
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Hinders

#5
I have niticed that tghe bed is too long. The storerooom is my discontinued games room(It´s HUGE), and if you´re curious the game on the poster is one of my older games that i made two years ago which name is super racing/drink n´bump racing, it´s a multiplayer game where you are two cars trying to race or shoot each other, pretty nice game, i you would like to try it , i could send it to you

p.s. i´m not a newbie i´ve made games  three years now
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Hinders

i´ve made a new background and a new player character:



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OneThinkingGal and ._.

You need to clean up the pictures and stop adding dissipated noise. The look is pixelly, but the noise is just detracting from it.

agswannabe

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