my latest background

[viktor]

I don't realy get what you mean. I'm working on the window at the moment. Maybe if you sould paintower the door and show me  :

[viktor]

here is a little update.

1.) I changed the shadowing of the fireplace
2.) changed the fireplace a bit
3.) fooled around with the door
4.) changed the dolar painting
5.) Added a sheene to the window but i think it's to bright and small.

[UP]

Wich post you don't understand?

Anyways, the window would look better if it was more "deeper" in the wall...

And BTW, here's a bit edited pic, but it's done with paint, so it's not very well done, but will give you some idea (sorry, but the image is a bmp file...): http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/pnteditviktorroom.bmp

[viktor]

heck I don't hawe any problems with BMPs and PAINT. Actualy this whole pic was done with PAINT. Only the window and pictures were done in Paintshop pro.

I think the window would look a lot beter if I would just delete the frame and put the window deeper in to the wall (just as you said).

edit: I took a closer look at your edit NOT YET. I agree with the window edit but not entirely with the door. The uper right part of the door lis far to low for my opinion.
Meybe I should just delet the door and hawe only a door frame like this:

[UP]

Yeah, well I didn't edit the door at all. I concentrated in the frames, as I mentioned. Actually I haven't payed attention to the door at all, just the frames of it...

[tErraformEr]

Hi.

I was looking at your image. The first thing I noticed, is that the door and your window are short, comparing the other sizes in the room. They seem too minimalistic. I suggest you try increasing it a bit, so they could get another "comfortable" look.

Also the image has "more weight" to the right. What I mean is that the big objects stand iin the center and right side of the image, leaving the left side "unsupported". It produces an unstable feeling.

Texturing the wall and floor a bit, could fill the room, and make it less cold.
Try varying the tones on the couch too. It gives the look of a black figure with no depth.

I hope I helped.

[UP]

Now that I saw it without the door, the frames are kinda askew... Is that word eve used?

[viktor]

AAA! Shit. Now I see what you mean. You ment the whole frame and not just the top part of the frame. Damn how could I hawe owerlooked that!  :o
I'll fix it as soon as I can.

[AgsFanatic]

You should work on shades and shading to. You said that the light source is the window but the actual shading seems produced by another source. For example the couch sould be all in shades since the light is from the back and the tv back also sould be all shaded and the tv table hasn't shade on the flor.....

[Oliver]

I think the floor looks a bit empty. Maybe some carpet would make it a little better?
or something.

[viktor]

I'm going to fix all your helpfull critics tomorow night. Now I'm going to bed and tomorow noon I'm going fisihng (try to relax from all the hard work during the holydays  )