Needs critics on the sprite of the bad boss

[RowenaTheWitch]

Hi guys!

I did aÃ,  paintover of the sprite of an existing character to make the sprite of the big bad boss of my game:

Here is the original image:

And here is the paintover:


I've voluntarily made the color of the wings a little different among the sprites, so that it all seems a game of lights (ok, not perfect, but cute)

What do you think?

[A�rendyll (formerly Yurina)]

I have some C&C:

- Does she have to be an illusion/dark boss? If so, then these colours are great.
- The colours aren't fully changed. You didn't paintover edges and parts of the gauntlets, so she they have the same colours as the wings.
- You shouldn't make such a big difference between the brightness of your colours. try to lower the contrast in the colourtones you used to recolour her. Especially the hair needs some restyling...

I'm not very fond of paintovers, but this one looks kind of cute.

~Yurina

[limeTree]

I see you used a character from Rpg game maker XP.
I think youll have to resize it or it will look small,depending on your background waith actually.
But i like it.

[RowenaTheWitch]

Thanks guys for the critics ^_^

- Does she have to be an illusion/dark boss? If so, then these colours are great.

She's certainly dark...yes maybe "illusion/dark" fits...*doesn't want to write spoilers*

- The colours aren't fully changed. You didn't paintover edges and parts of the gauntlets, so she they have the same colours as the wings.

Ops, the gloves! Yeah, they are colored wrong. Thanks.

I think youll have to resize it or it will look small,depending on your background waith actually.

Ehm...I *use* bg made with RPGmaker XP .... *dodges tomatoes*

[2ma2]

You dare dodging me? 

It is VERY cute for being an evil bad boss. The design is made for that angel character, and does not work as well. I'd rework the hairstyle, the eyes and the shape of the head. Try smaller eyes, or squinting. And work with the eyebrows to deliver a more eviliscious look.

Good luck!