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Title: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Mon 10/04/2006 20:58:00
Hello folks!

As you moght have noticed, I have started quite a few games already, but I won't bore you with a list and comments. This is the main character of an RPG I'm working on. I want some good old C&C about how I made her.

I prefer to keep the main body shape this way (or else I'll have to adapt my sprite bases, which is a nightmare to me), but I won't bite if it's no good.

Well,
here she is (http://www.dse.nl/~yurina/walk_south-01_kairi_FORUMVERSION.PNG).

I'm awaiting your reply!

~Yurina
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: DoorKnobHandle on Mon 10/04/2006 20:59:38
Your link is "broken":

Quote from: the pageDSE Server-verzoek niet toegestaan!

Dit verzoek /~yurina/walk_south-01_kairi_FORUMVERSION.PNG aan de Web-server van Digitale Stad Eindhoven is niet toegestaan!
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:00:08
Unfortunately, I get an error page.  ???
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Mon 10/04/2006 21:04:19
Other link then...

http://www.dse.nl/~yurina/gamefiles.htm

Of course, I forgot my "no directlinking!"-server thingy...
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:06:17
Very nice sprite.  :)

A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other? :-\
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Mon 10/04/2006 21:07:45
Quote from: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:06:17
A tiny fault I have with it, tho, is her knees. Shouldn't they be facing away, instead of towards, each other? :-\

Didn't notice that... I'll improve it right away.

EDIT: improved version is up!
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:19:50
Very nice sprite indeed. ;D
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Mon 10/04/2006 21:30:42
Quote from: LimpingFish on Mon 10/04/2006 21:19:50
Very nice sprite indeed. ;D

Thanks!
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: Nacho on Mon 10/04/2006 21:41:11
I tried to link the image to help the crits, but I get a red x. Sorry. Nice sprite though.
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: Peder 🚀 on Mon 10/04/2006 22:04:15
Quote from: Yurina on Mon 10/04/2006 21:30:42
(http://arnjeir.borgarholt.info/ags/art/kairi.gif)

Looks good!
I like it.

dont know of anything you could change....

Is there a nose there?Ã,  :-\
maybe a bit hard to make anything look like a nose on a so small sprite.. :P
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: lo_res_man on Mon 10/04/2006 23:17:14
I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion :-\
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Tue 11/04/2006 07:53:39
Thanks for putting it up this way, Peder, my website server doesn't support hotlinking.

Quote from: lo_res_man on Mon 10/04/2006 23:17:14
I like it but I think the angle should be a bit different. looks more like an adventure game sprite rather then RPG
just my opinion :-\

Well, I made my own base (sxplains the angle :P), and I like larger sprites a bit better than small ones. I can make more details! ;D

I'm glad you all like it (quotelist would be too long), Maybe I'll put up some other characters I'm working on (I need different bases for those...)
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: Tomb Raider on Wed 12/04/2006 18:18:13
Looks pretty flawless, can't wait to see it animated. :)
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Wed 12/04/2006 18:19:18
I'll work on an animated version the next days, but for now I'm trying to get at least 3 backgrounds done for in the game so I can FINALLY make an in production thread.
Title: Re: RPG character - how does she look?
Post by: A�rendyll (formerly Yurina) on Thu 20/04/2006 07:55:59
I edited the hands. Take a look.

~Yurina