Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: The Subliminal Messenger on Wed 13/08/2003 13:00:46

Title: Screenshot
Post by: The Subliminal Messenger on Wed 13/08/2003 13:00:46
This is a screenshot from the game I'm making. If anyone has any tips on how I can improve it, please post.
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Screenshot.jpg
Title: Re:Screenshot
Post by: danny* on Wed 13/08/2003 13:09:51
the hero is great :D

the BG is a bit flat.
Also there are no shadows!
You should add some more stuff to make it look full.
The colors are ok to me!
thats it!!
(hope it helps!)
Title: Re:Screenshot
Post by: The Subliminal Messenger on Wed 13/08/2003 13:30:53
Thanks. I'll try adding in some more shadows.
Title: Re:Screenshot
Post by: D · Y · D · O on Thu 14/08/2003 02:18:04
Also, the floor he's walking on has no thickness.
Title: Re:Screenshot
Post by: Nacho on Thu 14/08/2003 21:06:35
Hey Sublim! Welcome here... I´ve spotted somme kind of mistake... That red door is drawn in a very "goofy" style (Like in hannah-Barbera style, Day of tentacle), but the wood doors are "realistic". I see inconsistence on that.

Hope to help.