BG for New Game

[Indie Boy]

Since I dropped out from ATC Ive been working on a new game (1st) after a few projects I think I will finally finish this one. The game is about discovery and why one person's life could be responsible for life in our universe. Since I'm christain (not a big one, but I respect God and such) I question how someone could understand the story of creation back when the bible was writen. Anyway enough of the story, heres a bg of a house the guy finds.


Its unfinshed but it gives the general idea. It is meant to give the atmosphere of a kind of dark but mysteryous(sp) light as such, but I don't know If Ive done that. Please crit, paint overs welcome.

[BlackMan890]

humm, not bad, i would think the room is empty, but that it id propably suposed to be like that

Keep on the good work

[Indie Boy]

Yeh i was thinking that before. I might change the floor to wood to give it a little more interest. Is my perspective ok? Im using one v.p to give the feel of keep walking on and on. I was unsure about the window is that ok?

[BlackMan890]

umm... which one is the windows :p the bars or the picture

the perspective is really good, somehow reminds me of DOTT

keep up the good work... oh, add a little detail in the picture

[Indie Boy]

The window is on the left
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