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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: earlwood on Sun 10/08/2003 10:16:31

Title: Self Portiat
Post by: earlwood on Sun 10/08/2003 10:16:31
Here is a self portrait..I wanted it to be james bond..but he wasn't cool enough for the likes of my leisure suit
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/holycrapThats_it!.gif)
Woot, I have improved alot since I have been here..

C&C
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: Evil on Sun 10/08/2003 16:53:26
Very nice! You have gotten much much better. Theres not a lot to crit on other then style choices. Lets see some more!
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: loominous on Sun 10/08/2003 17:35:59
I like it. The main issue as I see it would be the flatness of the face.

Here s a quick attempt to make it more 3d:

Scaled:

(http://w1.865.telia.com/~u86517124/Downloadable/holycrapThats_it_mod1.png)

Orig size:

(http://w1.865.telia.com/~u86517124/Downloadable/holycrapThats_it_mod1.png)

The blue squiddling is just to show where I ve edited.

I think the pic is selfexplanatory.

Hope it helps.
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: loominous on Sun 10/08/2003 18:02:15
To explain the shading, here s the headshape that I pictured in my mind as I shaded:

Please excuse the sloppiness;

(http://w1.865.telia.com/~u86517124/Downloadable/holycrapThats_it_mod1_sh.png)

Hope it helps
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: agsking on Sun 10/08/2003 21:23:43
Very good!

loominous: You should make a tutorial on shading.
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: earlwood on Mon 11/08/2003 19:23:40
Woah, thanks loominous, that helps alot.
Title: Re:Self Portiat
Post by: n3tgraph on Tue 12/08/2003 09:49:57
Loominus that kicks ass :o

and you too earlwood, great picture!