First screenshot from my new game

[Mouth for war]

Here it is!!





It's in a early stage of production and I haven't really made the story yet. The one thing I DO know is that your good points and reputation will make a big difference. If your reputation is bad some people won't share info with you, but on the contrary if you have a good reputation other people will think you're a goody two shoes and won't talk to you because of that. You'll be able to change your points doing various stuff...for example...if you see a bottle on the ground you can recycle it for 1 point...or you can choose to shoot at a window with your soft air gun and lower your points...Well that's my vision and i hope I'll manage to pull it off Hope it sounds interesting so far.

[Matti]

So, what kind of critique are you looking for? Regarding your idea or the background?

Anyway, I like the idea, reminds me of Fallout. The background is nice too. One thing that bugs me is the legs of the girl, they look a bit.. off.. like one leg is longer than the other above the knee.

Btw, I hate clicking on thumbnails to see the full picture, why don't you use the direct link to the image?

[Mouth for war]

I tried to do a direct link but it didn't seem to work :S  oh and all critique is good. regarding the idea or the screenie

[Khris]

After the upload, there's a field where it says "direct link". Simply put this between img tags:

Code: ags

[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/4908/screen1cf.png[/img]

Also, yes, her lower legs are too short. If you pull your legs to your body, the heels touch the buttocks. Her shoes should easily reach to the ground.