C&C on some guy

[Mozesh]

Hey people, here I am back at the 2d art:

2X

I totally screwed up the right side of his jacket (in our pov)
But what do you think?

[Ishmael]

It's a bit flat, you should maybe try to add some "roundness" to him with some darker or denser shading.

[InCreator]

It's very flat.
Here's some tips to improve the looks...

* I recommend stonger contrast in shading, much stronger.
* And lower-saturation clothes color.
* Put a white pixel or two to eyes, they're too grey.
* The nose - between eyes  - looks quite weird... work around
* Straight line at the center of the shirt won't fit with the overall messiness of clothes. Bend/curve it!

I like the overall look on his face, but fixing these little issues might improve everything alot and make it much better.