Sherif for C'n'C

[spoofer4ever]

A sherif I drew for my game. Something seems wrong with him to me.

[HingedShinobi]

I can't see the picture

[veryweirdguy]

Just a few suggestions:

Lower the head & thicken the neck. At the moment he looks like some kind of giraffe-cowboy.

Try to make him a little more.......symmetrical. The arms are different thicknesses - his right arm is thicker. Also, I'd make his actual arms a little thicker - they are a bit......strawy (for want of a better word).

To sort out the face a little, perhaps add some hair & try to make the nose look a little more realistic - do this by studying your own nose in a mirror perhaps & try to copy the shape.

Also, to make him more of a definate cowboy, I'd suggest studying a lot of cowboy pictures to see what clothing they wear. You could get the colours & general style & look better this way:

Google image search for cowboys

But still, not a bad start . You're on your way to having a great sprite.

[spoofer4ever]

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cowboy100.bmp (Fixed the links)
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cowboy_200.bmp

There are the links for those who cant see the pic

[jetxl]

Yes, he doesn't have any guns! What kind of selfrespecting sherif wouldn't carry a gun. Do you know how wild the west is?  : D

[veryweirdguy]

Neither of those work. I saw the image when it was a bmp - before you changed it to a png. I can't see any of your png ones.

[LordHart]

I thought you cant post bitmaps otherwise it comes up I'm With Stupid and it has an arrow pointing at your avatar...

Anyway, I cant see the pics either...

[veryweirdguy]

He posted links to the bmp versions, somewhat like this:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cowboy100.bmp
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Cowboy_200.bmp

That's the bmp versions I saw.

[spoofer4ever]

Here's the edited edition!

changes: some hair.
A gun.
Bullets on belt.
Different boot shape.
Accesory to boot.
Fixed the arms.
lowerd and thickend the neck


Aha! the pic workes

[ArtJoe]

your last pic...you modified the 200 percent drawing..with tiny changes..it looks good...but when you shrink it back youll lose all the detail