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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Krazy on Fri 10/09/2004 15:05:42

Title: Short Animation
Post by: Krazy on Fri 10/09/2004 15:05:42
Here's a short flash animation I made for fun. I'm not sure why I made it, I just really like drawing and animating.
http://home.graffiti.net/sunfungames:graffiti.net/man.html
I don't know if I'm very good yet though, but eh I'm only 13.  :P
Critiques please.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Sam. on Fri 10/09/2004 15:19:16
hehe, i like it. kind neat stlye, i like the b/w, it make sit feel better.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Krazy on Fri 10/09/2004 15:22:15
Thanks and yeah, I tried colouring it but it just didn't feel right.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Ali on Fri 10/09/2004 15:53:06
I think it's terrific, It reminds me of the Morph cartoons. The only thing I'd suggest is altering his dive little, just before he disappeats his arm is in an odd position - a little close to his body I think.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Phemar on Fri 10/09/2004 16:05:33

Hey that's pretty sweet. As said by Ali, alter the dive a bit. I'd also make him got to blob form when he dives so it looks like the animation is a loop.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Krazy on Fri 10/09/2004 16:19:27
Quote from: Ali on Fri 10/09/2004 15:53:06
I think it's terrific, It reminds me of the Morph cartoons. The only thing I'd suggest is altering his dive little, just before he disappeats his arm is in an odd position - a little close to his body I think.

Ok, I'll try fixing it. And yes it is inspired from those old claymation shows such as Morph and Gumby.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: pslocum on Fri 10/09/2004 17:45:16
Nice animation. Conveys a lot of personality. Outside of the dive, I don't see anything that needs improvement.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Eggie on Fri 10/09/2004 17:59:48
I like it alot. Especially the animation when he oushes the button.
Title: Re: Short Animation
Post by: Krazy on Sun 12/09/2004 12:35:56
Thank you  :)