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[Jakerpot]

Thanks!  i tested changing the black outline for a colored one. It work`s! Yes, i think a rounded pipe would be better, don`t?
i will animate the candle, it was my idea, but i putted in the background just to you see it. I will have to apply the changes to the other rooms too... I just made a few, but now i gonna focus on this room.
J-

[SpacePirateCaine]

Sounds like a great idea, Jakerpot. You can definitely improve the visual quality of the room by avoiding any 100% black lines unless absolutely necessary/appropriate, and instead using darker shades of the active colors in your background. I think you could do wonders for that pipe if you rounded it out - you'll also note, of course, that its bottom is above your horizon (a horizontal line running through your vanishing point), so you should be able to see the hole in the bottom of the pipe.

And yes, spend all the time you need on the background to make it look great - The more you focus and work on making one background look great, the better the following backgrounds will be. Don't rush your game, take the time to do it right and it'll be that much better for it.

[Jakerpot]

Ok, thanks 
I will round that pipe and make it "maybe" dirty red, like a rusty one. The main character should fit inside it, so i can do a great animation on it. more suggestions? And ALPHA2T: How you mean much random? how can i fix it?
Thanks! J-

[Jakerpot]

Damn modify button that isn`t working on my pc...
Ok, i finished another part of the dungeon the next is to change the floor to something more dirty, but i can`t find the correct color! If you can helo me finding a color little darker than this one, i would be glad, because i tryed and tryed and the color didn`t arrived... Well, i was thinking on add something more... A little pond water (sorry, i`m not american, is that right?) on the floor, a closed place like this one should have some humidity, i think. Well, the backgroynd is 100,000,000 times better than the original, but i will keep it to do a comparison later. What more can i do on this one? Ah, Eureka! If i add a droping water on the ceiling? i think it would be great don`t?
before i forget:

here is the new one. I was thinking, wouldn`t be better if the room itself where more dark?
J-