Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?

[CherishKuddleMonster]

Not sure how to remove this post, I'm going to redo the entire thing.

Thanks for replies.

[Click'd]

To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

[Stupot]

The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

[CherishKuddleMonster]

To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

Thanks for suggestion I'm going to start over from scratch.

[CherishKuddleMonster]

The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

[Click'd]

Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

B/w is totally fine. I could see all of it.

[ManicMatt]

I struggled to make it out on my laptop, so Stupot wasn't the only one.