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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Fronzel on Tue 04/05/2004 08:03:41

Title: Sketches, C&C
Post by: Fronzel on Tue 04/05/2004 08:03:41
Here is a sketch I did, wondering what ya'll thought of it, any C&C would be appreciated (I'd like to improve in the art department)

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Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: [Cameron] on Tue 04/05/2004 08:07:44
Fallout fan, perhaps. Its great i love the pic. with the arms, is he holding a shotgun?
Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: Fronzel on Tue 04/05/2004 08:39:35
Thanks, he's not holding anything, just didn't want to have the arms at the same position.
I hadn't thought about fallout, but, I do see a resemblance. :)
Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: on Tue 04/05/2004 20:51:43
*Bump*

Any thoughts on it? Proportion that could be fixed, etc?
Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: big brother on Tue 04/05/2004 21:05:42
Forearms look short, waist looks low, legs look short, chest region sags outward, stance looks awkward (did someone say 'air guitar'?), and colors look garish. He might appreciate some ears...

To give your character substance, try working around a central curve for his stance. Also employ a contraposto position, with his higher hip on the same side with his lower shoulder.
Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: on Tue 04/05/2004 21:28:35
Thank you!  Knew there was something wrong with the hip-shoulder relationship there, but couldn't decide what.  He does have ears though, just not well defined in the sketch.  On leg length, whats the proportion on leg length to body length, I seem to remember the head is roughly 1/6, but I always seem to make my legs too short, and a little on the beefy side.  Yeah, the coloring was done late at night, and I ended up not liking my color job, I might just post the uncolored sketch when I get back.
Title: Re: Colored Sketch, C&C
Post by: Fronzel on Wed 05/05/2004 21:05:46
Hey here's another sketch, which I won't color this time (had a bad time of that on the first one).Ã,  Thoughts? C&C?
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