Some guy

[Mozesh]

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/jeffzor.jpg
Yo , im gonna make a game with some cartoony caracters.
Plz tell me what you think of this guy. Repaints are welcome.

[Phemar]

He's nice, just his arms are a bit too big and his neck looks too fat. But then again it is a cartoon...

[Mozesh]

Could anyone make a front view of that caracter for me?
I tried and i f*cked up.

[Damien]

I like the cartoony style you're going for, looks realy cool.

Here is what you could change:
-the right arm is too long (unless that's what you were going for)
-in his current posture, his both feet should be facing the same direction

Also, here's a suggestion, when posting small sprites with small amount of colors use .gif or .png compression.Ã,  Jpg smudges things up and people will have a hard time repainting your images. To explain this better, here is your pic at 200% zoom:

[viktor]

-in his current posture, his both feet should be facing the same direction

Hm...
Maybee. But not absolutley necesery. The left leg couldbe fasing downward slightly. But then the leg would hawe to be longer.  Speaking of legs they realy look short. Maybee if you make them just a few pixels longer...