(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/Hanaspoint.jpg)
Meh Bryce 5 was free. I must stress the landscape took little effort whatsoever, I just made the dropship (which you can barely see >_<)
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/Drop.jpg)
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/fortresssofar.jpg)
Fortress thingy unfinished.
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/Deskofasoldier.jpg)
Desk of a Soldier.
2D artage
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/Comm.jpg)
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/sketches.jpg)
Some BAD sketches of mine I did while I was waiting for my brother to come off Battlefield. I sorta overlayed some colour quickish.
(http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/Cluey3/unfinishedslide1copy.jpg)
It all looks pretty nice while I quickly scanned over it...except...that pencil...... :o OMG. It....it is soooo round.........it's so round it looks unrealistic. Nothing that round can possibly exist...right?
Lol...just...try and do something about that round pencil. Please. PLEASE. :=
If you're on about the 3D piece, the one sticking out from behind the scope, erm its a bullet :P. For some reason the texture looked wierd on it so the tip was brighter as opposed to darker. If you're on about the pencil sketches, I'm not too sure what you're getting at.
I don't know much about 3d art, so I'll comment on your 2d. I sense some Naruto influences. The "inked" (dunno if it is inked or not) is nice. A good flow in the "commander" piece, albeit the right part of him is somewhat funky. Better make a negative space just like in the left side of him. The design is great, simple and effective. Very gung-ho piratey. Your sketches could benefit from minimising the amount of lines, but if they turn from those sketches into the good lineart in the "commander" piece, I have no real trouble with it.
Ahh...I meant the bullet, yes. Erm...somehow it just looked like a pencil to me. However it's still infuriatingly round. ;)
Looking good, I really like the first image.
Modelling could be more complex, now its just boxes or cylinders, and lot of them miss smoothing, as you can see the polygons quite clearly. Other than that, it looks good.
Textures look good too, and I see the last picture is still in the the Work In Progress- status. Try adding some highlight to it. Something like a little blue blare would be nice. And the hand-held-computer's screen should emit some more light too.
Keep it up!