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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Morgan on Sun 25/05/2003 21:04:52

Title: some new characters
Post by: Morgan on Sun 25/05/2003 21:04:52
I don't have a story for the game yet, but I know these characters will be in it. The game will take place on a space ship and the guy with the brown hair will be the main character. Let me know what you think of the drawings and how I could make them better.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Space_game_characters.bmp)
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Sun 25/05/2003 21:34:18
theyre great, looks like a good game, even without a plot...
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Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Sun 25/05/2003 21:37:26
can you please replace with a GIF, PNG or if need be, JPG

secondly, good characters, however you havent resized properly (when making larger) resulting in it not looking as good.
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Sun 25/05/2003 21:59:43
oh yeh, theyve been stretched.
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Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Morgan on Mon 26/05/2003 17:06:39
I made the pic a jpg and I resized it better.
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Space_game_characters2.jpg)
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Scummbuddy on Mon 26/05/2003 17:10:22
Wow, I like these characters a lot!  They have a personality all on their own.  Please continue with these.
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: BOYD1981 on Tue 27/05/2003 00:23:55
hmm, that guy with the green stuff round his gob kinda reminds me a lot of Weird Ed from DOTT...
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Synthetique on Tue 27/05/2003 00:33:58
yes! and that green goo reminds me of....
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Xadhoom on Tue 27/05/2003 00:43:59
They all look great, excpect for some minor nitpicking:
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I would make the legs of the small guy in red a pixel or two wider to the right. As it is now, he seems a little off balance.
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The face of the old guy is pretty hard to make out. Perhaps if you made the shadowlines darker it would be easier to read.
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The big guy in red don't really look liek he's sitting on the chair...he hasn't got a whole lot of weight to him. Perhaps if you made his feet sit flat on the ground, and rounded his back a little. I don't know exactly what it is, but something is looking weird about his pose here.
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Otherwise great work. :)
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Neole on Tue 27/05/2003 09:21:10
I love em - both the designs and the poses!

Xadhoom is right, the big guy appears to be just perched on the edge of his chair, but I didnt notice that till I looked for it. If you pull the bottom edge of the chair a bit longer to the left it would make him sit more comfortable, but I like it as it is now.
Title: Re:some new characters
Post by: Flippy_D on Tue 27/05/2003 13:04:32
The old dude appears to only have one leg. The guy you're thinking of is Ed Edison, BOYD. Ex-raging psychotic. Likes his stamps. Fond of hampsters.