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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Mozesh on Wed 15/06/2005 21:42:36

Title: Something Beatboxish
Post by: Mozesh on Wed 15/06/2005 21:42:36
Hey guys I was bored so I made something for my starting Beatbox career :P
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/mozesh1.png)
Not AGS related but just trying to improve my art.
Title: Re: Something Beatboxish
Post by: Babar on Wed 15/06/2005 21:53:11
what is beatbox?
Nice work. The hand looks weird to me though. Like it is too close to his face, and belongs to someone else
Title: Re: Something Beatboxish
Post by: ildu on Wed 15/06/2005 22:27:06
Beatboxing is making sounds with your mouth that act as beats to mc on.
Title: Re: Something Beatboxish
Post by: InCreator on Wed 15/06/2005 22:43:40
Not bad!

I'd point out some areas in need of more interest:

* right ear (somewhat weird  :-\)
* overall shading color. The pic should look much better if shading was stronger (more contrasty)
* right eye. It seems a bit too small, the face isn't angled that much
* Usage of line tool! Try using more curves and less straight lines. Especially when doing hair...

The title name looks excellent. But blue letters on background give a headache of smaller sort.

Title: Re: Something Beatboxish
Post by: Babar on Wed 15/06/2005 22:48:07
oops...forget what I said about the mike being too close to his face then