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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Anarcho on Tue 26/04/2005 05:00:37

Title: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: Anarcho on Tue 26/04/2005 05:00:37
Can I get a little C+C on this sprite?  It's the last character I've had to draw for my game...I think he looks pretty cool.  I always struggle a bit with the hair, but I think that looks ok...

(http://www.geocities.com/princebusterlw/prisoner1.png)
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: Squinky on Tue 26/04/2005 05:05:03
I really like it. You've go your own style and its cool. Good job man....
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: Kweepa on Tue 26/04/2005 05:56:47
Great character.
I thought it could do with some little tweaks
- arm length
- his right sleeve
- waist line (the high waist line might be a design choice...?)
- some subtle wrinkles

(http://www.mccrea.demon.co.uk/step/ags/emilyenoughtweak.png)
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: skw on Tue 26/04/2005 09:23:09
Good work, Anarcho! As I once said, I like your style, that's really cool! :D
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: Moebius on Tue 26/04/2005 12:15:21
Hey man, that's the stuff!  8)
But I have one little remark:
You may "straighten" this guy (I mean , he is a little bend down)
But...maybe it's only perpective... ;)

And that's all. Keep on truckin'!

Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: jasonjkay on Tue 26/04/2005 13:15:48
He look's kinda sad and huanted. That's kind of hard to do so I think you have done a great job.
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: RyRayer on Tue 26/04/2005 13:37:10
Forehead is too big maybe. Who is this character by the way? Prisoner? If so, that would explain the sadness in his face.
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: Anarcho on Tue 26/04/2005 14:46:15
Thanks for the comments.  He is a mental patient, who inexplicably is wearing a prison jumpsuit.  The forehead is big because I was drawing from a photo of Clint Eastwood---that guy has one big forhead!  It's a little exagerrated in this case, but it's a cartoon.
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: ildu on Tue 26/04/2005 15:37:48
Looks awesome. The changes Steve made were quite appopriate, but I would leave the waistline and the pants alone. The forehead and posture is fine. It looks very original and obscure. I love it.
Title: Re: Sprite C+C for Emily Enough
Post by: fovmester on Thu 28/04/2005 07:51:11
Quote from: ildu on Tue 26/04/2005 15:37:48
Looks awesome. The changes Steve made were quite appopriate, but I would leave the waistline and the pants alone. The forehead and posture is fine. It looks very original and obscure. I love it.

I was just about to say that! :) Really great! I love your style.