Modern Blues/Rock Tune (MP3)

[DoorKnobHandle]

Hey there,

I just made this tune two or three days ago. I created in my own little homestudio here.
It's one of the very first things I've did with it so far... Well, I would just like to have your
critique on it. It's only 36 seconds long and smaller than 1 MB.

I play all three guitars, the one bass line and I programmed the drumset myself.
I am aware that the guitar solo is not exactly in time, but it was a real solo (not written
out before).

Just go ahead and check it out:
http://datenfunk.bei.t-online.de/modernblues.mp3

[Flippy_D]

You need to work a little on your sense of rhythm, but it's okay for a first try.

[DoorKnobHandle]

thanks. thats definately it. I thought of correcting the whole solo. but somehow... too much work for nothing.