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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: voh on Sat 12/05/2007 14:23:58

Title: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: voh on Sat 12/05/2007 14:23:58
Started playing around with a different style of pixelatin' a character, and now I'm angling for some C&C :)

(http://www.danwa.net/junk/ags/tory.png)

Thanks in advance!
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: cobra79 on Sat 12/05/2007 18:18:46
He looks good to me. Love the drugged expression. Maybe his ears are a bit too high.
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: nihilyst on Sat 12/05/2007 18:20:41
He looks like he was bending down a bit. I agree on the ears, but other than that, I really like the style.
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: voh on Sat 12/05/2007 19:09:40
He's hunched over a bit, droopy shoulders 'n all. The ears are a bit too high up, didn't realize that before. Thanks for mentioning it, will fix that :)
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: Babar on Sat 12/05/2007 19:14:52
Give him some hair along his ears. He may not be a sideburns guy, but everbody has SOME hair there, unless they're wearing a wig. And maybe you could add a shade/highlight to his hair?
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: monkey0506 on Mon 14/05/2007 19:38:59
Quote from: Babar on Sat 12/05/2007 19:14:52Give him some hair along his ears. He may not be a sideburns guy, but everbody has SOME hair there, unless they're wearing a wig

Clearly he's not just "not a sideburns guy" but he's rather an anti-sideburns guy. He absolutely loathes sideburns. So he shaved them off. All of them. All the way up to the top of his curiously misshapen skull.

Besides...the way he's holding himself he's clearly about to fall asleep standing up. Just look at him. He's mad as hell. And tired too. Just like me. Everyone isn't just exactly like he's exactly like the way I am without sideburns which I have.
Title: Re: [sprite] Trying something new.
Post by: manored on Mon 14/05/2007 21:17:32
If you look close, you see that his mouth is equal to his nose... :)

Just a detail, but once you notice it it gets weird, so maybe you should change.

And good job on the rest! Its like thousands of times better than anything I could draw! :)