Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: on Fri 24/06/2005 15:24:01

Title: Sprites coming...
Post by: on Fri 24/06/2005 15:24:01
In that link there are some of my drawings.
I'm beginning an adventure and I'll use them.
http://www.forumfree.net/?t=3412178&view=getlastpost#lastpost
What do you think?

P.S.
I know, the first drawing in the page is horrible but it was a  test.
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: InCreator on Fri 24/06/2005 16:26:57
Not too bad. You need to pay more attention to body shape, it looks very cartoony right now, yet the face doesn't suggets cartoons. Also, It's hard to imagine such sprites in a game...

Why didn't you put links to pictures directly here? The page is not english and so scares away many critics.
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: on Fri 24/06/2005 16:42:12
I'm sorry.
These are the links to the images you should see.
http://img230.echo.cx/img230/9235/pg1face4vf.jpg
http://img171.echo.cx/img171/2911/asd2jy.png
http://img131.echo.cx/img131/1516/protagonista0xe.png
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: Timmo on Sun 26/06/2005 03:23:28
On third picure, man's hands are too far from body, that is only my opinion.
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: UP on Sun 26/06/2005 09:41:51
I think so too...

Also, I'm not sure if you intended it, but in the same pic (#3) the legs are way too long...
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: Babar on Mon 27/06/2005 13:05:09
Very nice. Expressive drawings.
The 1st pic: There is one part on the guy's chin where the line comes out of his face. Just a little distracting.

2nd pic: Me likey...however, you might want to make the front part of the guy a little less straight.

3rd pic: Not sure if the hands are too far from the body, but they seem a bit short. Also, I think you should add more detailed folds to the jeans
Title: Re: Sprites coming...
Post by: on Mon 27/06/2005 14:52:38
Thanks for the advices.
I'll follow them.
Soon I'll show you other sprites.