Ok. I'd like to hear some critique about my character
(http://img25.exs.cx/img25/209/Bjorn_ShowOff.jpg)
I call him simply 'The Swedish Football Coach', 'cause y'know he kinda looks like one.
This is my first character ever, and as a matter of fact my first post ever. I've already
noticed some things wrong with the character:
1. Weird angles all over the place. This is because my mouse, at the time, had bad precision.
2. No Charisma. Not the main character.
3. Bad colouring. I was lazy.
So please, feel free to comment on him.
Quote from: Enigmatic Pedi on Fri 06/08/2004 01:10:08
Oops. This was no nOObism, just a little mix-up. Sorry.
That's what they all say... :D
Nice char, just the lines seem a little wobbly and maybe his mouth is too high. His jacket is also too blue for me, though some may disagree.
Well, welcome to the forums, buddy.
I am a swedish guy and I can tell you that he doesn't look so Swedish for me. Other than that he looks funny. But one crit: Mind the double-pixles please. And also his right arm looks a bit strange.
Hi! Welcome to the forums. When you save, then if possible, could you save as .png? because it has smaller filesize and no visible quality loss.
As I said earlier, my mouse had REALLY bad precision. Had I drawn by hand, i wouldn't have the wobbly lines. Was the right arm badly proportioned? Or what was so strange about it? The mouth was too high? Too close to the nose or too far away from the chin? Please, be more specific
I'm also swedish, and i actually think he DOES look like a swedish coach.
More of a kid-team coach though.