T-shirt design

[DonB]

Hello all,

It's been a while since I posted here, since I don't use AGS anymore,

Of course tho, I'm not standing still.. I'm busy with my own t-shirt label and this topic is about the design I'm probably gonna release the upcoming summer..

Apart from the model of the shirt (which you obviously can't see now, I can tell you it's gonna be a slim fit shirt tho) and of course the font which is just "bought" from the Internet..

Im curious what you guys think of the location of the words, the line itself and the used colors (its printed on a black background since the t-shirt will be black).

The idea
The whole idea about the design is a catchy design about my hometown Gorcum.
Also, the design is dipped into a kinda underground scene-ish "street"style, altho not overdone and maybe overseen by a lot.

The design
The design is based on simplicity, catchyness and made for young people (15-30) who are selfensured.
It's supposed to be a shirt in which you could go out in a club.

Altho the design may look very quick made to some of you, I've been perfecting it for the last days by changing positioning and all every time.. so please don't think of this as a rush design.

I hope for some good critics and maybe improvements before I'm gonna let it print upon my shirts.

The design:



Thanks in advance for looking.

[Khris]

I'd say the huge holes need to go:



Not that polished, just a quick idea.

[DonB]

Thanks for the idea Khris,

I was long time doubting about this, I might make a "polished" version and see what people like better..

The longer I look at your version, the better I like it over my own.. altho the whole idea gets more like a flyer like that.. With the holes it fills up the t-shirt more imo..

What do the rest think? Cutting away the holes or stick with the original?

[Chicky]

Heh, Gore cum.


*edit- screw t-shirts, finish Roxy Fox! ...and space out the font a little.