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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: BruisedWeasel on Sun 11/05/2003 05:40:33

Title: Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: BruisedWeasel on Sun 11/05/2003 05:40:33
I started this early yesterday morning and just finished it now. I don't like the postition of the character, the hand looks wrong, and her left shin is far too thin. Other than that, any crit?

(http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/weaseltit/bcfinal.gif)

and because I like to record projects that take a while, here's an animation of the steps I took:
(http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/weaseltit/bcsteps.gif)
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Andail on Sun 11/05/2003 09:00:35
She's really cool...I love the recording, that will be a fine tutorial for people
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Renal Shutdown on Sun 11/05/2003 09:32:54
Hey

Hm...  took a while, but worth the wait.  I'm not sure her leg's as dangerously thin as you made out, tho.  She looks kinda southern.

Hugs Y'all
Iqu

* Iqu refrains from making a lewd comment, as he's sure someone else will make one that's wittier...
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Neole on Sun 11/05/2003 13:05:58
No crits - very stylish and very well drawn.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Ben on Sun 11/05/2003 16:02:37
Looks good. I like the style of shading you have there. The face looks really good too.

I'm not sure about the pose though. I'm not sure if she could stand like that in real life, unless she was leaning against a wall on her left side..
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Sluggo on Sun 11/05/2003 23:40:58
Flamingo woman looks exellent.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: BruisedWeasel on Mon 12/05/2003 03:21:18
Quote from: Sluggo on Sun 11/05/2003 23:40:58
Flamingo woman looks exellent.

;D Yes, I really do hate that pose. I tend not to care about the subject's ability to maitain its pose. I just bend whatever limb I wish in whatever direction I feel would give me an oportunity for practice. Thanks for all the positive comments. Now that they're out of the way, maybe someone could stop by and start nitpicking.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: DragonRose on Wed 14/05/2003 22:02:39
The facial features seem a bit far down on the head.

(http://invis.free.anonymizer.com/http://www.geocities.com/dragonrose_1/bcfinal.png)

A little edit, I hope you don't mind. I just moved the eyes and lips a bit further up.  You did a fantastic job on the shading, though, which I can't do for shit.  Good job.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: BruisedWeasel on Thu 15/05/2003 03:26:10
Wow, that little edit made a huge difference in her expression. She looks much colder now. It would look really good if I straightened out her flamingo leg.

And thank you for the compliment concerning my shading. I'm not confident in my shading skills, which is partly why I kept her clothing to a minimum.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: DGMacphee on Thu 15/05/2003 04:09:37
This isn't really a crit, but the hair falling back makes it look like she has very hair armpits.

And that's cool, if you like that sort of things.
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: n3tgraph on Thu 15/05/2003 07:36:20
I don't know if I'm right, but her right boobs seems to fall a bit out of place

But I could be wrong

Great picture Melia! :)
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: Eggie on Thu 15/05/2003 16:38:04
*puts on GIR voice*
She's got elf eaaars
Title: Re:Teh sexy bluecup
Post by: on Fri 23/05/2003 04:51:37
very nice, but maybe she've soo small feets?