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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: neighbour on Thu 31/07/2003 21:07:41

Title: testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: neighbour on Thu 31/07/2003 21:07:41
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/medieval_sexsuit.JPG

this looks just like vicky from LSL7, but it's not. I made this one from scratch to practise my art. waddya think?
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Jimi on Thu 31/07/2003 21:21:53
Its very nice, but the nipples look a little....plasticy
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: veryweirdguy on Fri 01/08/2003 15:31:37
Quote(warning! topless nudity!)

Surely that's an encouragement?

On topic, I think she's a little cross-eyed, but it's a great job for the most part!
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Synthetique on Fri 01/08/2003 18:37:37
i think....... it sux. cant say what it is but i hate it
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: rodekill on Fri 01/08/2003 22:11:04
If you can't justify your opinion, then guess what? It sux.
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Hollister Man on Sat 02/08/2003 03:11:40
It is in the LSL7 Style alright.  I would double the resolution and smooth out those lines though.  

To follow the topic, Opinions are like buttholes.  Everyone has one and sometimes they stink.
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Ciro Durán on Sat 02/08/2003 05:45:36
The woman could look very good (Yes, she IS Vicky :)), but the sketching is a bit irregular. Maybe I'm wrong, but I think you colored over a directly scanned image... I recommend you to trace the image first (put it in a background layer and on the front layer putting short lines following the original sketch). Keep up the hard work  ;)
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Leisuresuitpim on Sat 02/08/2003 09:59:41
She sure has a huge ass. ;D But hey....we all prefer other things.
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: neighbour on Sat 02/08/2003 15:37:59
If it sucks so much, feel free to make improvements. I don't mind. and yes. her ass got a little big somehow.
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: noed on Sat 02/08/2003 18:00:45
It's not her butt, it's her waist...it is too small for her shape, she'd break in half.  The nipples might look less harsh if the areola didn't have an outline.  Normally I wouldn't be so confident in my advice, but I'm pretty current on the female form. ;)

This might just be subjective, but have you tried putting clothes on her? ;D
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: shitar on Mon 04/08/2003 03:10:16
 :o
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: MrColossal on Mon 04/08/2003 05:51:12
which program are you using neighbour?

i'd suggest using a the straight line tool to trace over it and smooth out those lines.

and wow synthetique... i'm surprised at you
Title: Re:testing my LSL7 art (warning! topless nudity!)
Post by: Erwin_Br on Mon 04/08/2003 09:31:21
Quote from: MrColossal on Mon 04/08/2003 05:51:12
which program are you using neighbour?

i'd suggest using a the straight line tool to trace over it and smooth out those lines.

and wow synthetique... i'm surprised at you

Maybe his account is hacked? Haven't seen him around for a while plus his avatar is suddenly gone. Weirdness...

On topic: I think you can improve your image by replacing the yellow background with a softer colour. This would probably make your character stand out better.

--Erwin