Background and music. [New Update last post]

Peder 🚀 · Fri 17/03/2006 17:44:45

First I wants to ask for help to how I can make a desk the right way on this background:

In the area ive marked I thought of putting a desk and a chair.
there will be a dead man in the chair with his head and arms on the desk.

So , the music:
http://arnjeir.borgarholt.info/ags/music/fallenangel/music02.mp3
I started making songs in midi but I wasent comfortable working with it, so I decided to use my PS2 and a program called "MTV Musicgenerator 2" instead.
It is crappy but works for this game..
And I found it easier to work with, since I have made lots of music in that program allready..

Peder 🚀 · Fri 17/03/2006 18:32:53

so, I tried to make a desk..
what do you think?

Corey · Fri 17/03/2006 18:37:07

I dont know about perspective but I think it looks fine

Peder 🚀 · Fri 17/03/2006 18:43:29

Quote from: Corey on Fri 17/03/2006 18:37:07
I dont know about perspective but I think it looks fine

its a bit to small I noticed now, I pasted the main character in and it looked wierd...

[Edit]
changed it a bit, looks like the perspective needs to be changed (perspective is my biggest problem!)

Peder 🚀 · Sat 18/03/2006 00:05:45

Tried to add some stuff, it wont fit PERFECT to the main character, but I thought it was ok..

MarVelo · Sat 18/03/2006 00:10:25

The door is huge compared to the character. The room is very large for there to only be a desk in it.

Peder 🚀 · Sat 18/03/2006 00:38:44

Quote from: taffytom on Sat 18/03/2006 00:10:25
The door is huge compared to the character. The room is very large for there to only be a desk in it.

thats not all in the room, but the other stuff in the room is on the other end in just black.

Made the door a little bit smaller and added the rest:

Afflict · Sat 18/03/2006 01:44:25

To me this doesnt feel like a room...

it feels like a hallway.

Anyway some tips or crits from my POV

The wall is to high look at your door and the distance to the roof.
The side walls will be nice to see so that you get the feel of a room.

Hey whatever heres a quick paint over.. took out your foreground objects
you can replace them jsut use two tones to give them perspective...
IMO of course...

Aded a pic to wall...

Peder 🚀 · Sat 18/03/2006 02:10:55

hi, well, its a "room" in a "cave".
but I agree it looked like a hallway!

Ill do some changes to it now.

[Edit]
Changed it:

havent added any picture yet though.. might and might not..

Afflict · Sat 18/03/2006 06:29:07

Lewks beter !!!

The picture thingy was just so you get the whole perspective thingy btw cant wait to see where this games going... goodluck for mags and really enjoyes your sam is missing!

Peder 🚀 · Sat 18/03/2006 10:29:57

Quote from: Afflict on Sat 18/03/2006 06:29:07
Lewks beter !!!

The picture thingy was just so you get the whole perspective thingy btw cant wait to see where this games going... goodluck for mags and really enjoyes your sam is missing!

Thanks!.

and thanks again

.

Ace_Gamer · Sat 18/03/2006 17:43:20

would you mind if i used your music file for my game. it sounds really good. i think its the perfect type of thing for my intro.

Peder 🚀 · Sat 18/03/2006 18:23:36

Quote from: Ace_Gamer on Sat 18/03/2006 17:43:20
would you mind if i used your music file for my game. it sounds really good. i think its the perfect type of thing for my intro.

Just make sure to credit me and you can use it

Ace_Gamer · Sun 19/03/2006 13:23:59

ok. thnx alot

Afflict · Sun 19/03/2006 13:39:05

Quote from: Ace_Gamer on Sat 18/03/2006 17:43:20
would you mind if i used your music file for my game. it sounds really good. i think its the perfect type of thing for my intro.

Could of pm'd him hijacking the thread

Anyway its a really nice music track.

Peder 🚀 · Sun 19/03/2006 16:04:08

Quote from: Afflict on Sun 19/03/2006 13:39:05
Anyway its a really nice music track.

Thanks

Afflict · Sun 19/03/2006 19:12:49

Oh yeah one more thing are you going to texture? I know its a mags game but are you?

Peder 🚀 · Sun 19/03/2006 20:15:36

Quote from: Afflict on Sun 19/03/2006 19:12:49
Oh yeah one more thing are you going to texture? I know its a mags game but are you?

if I got time left.... and if I learn how to do it