I have found what i think is a good system for making music and this is a theme maybe for my next game.
http://ravenadventure.googlepages.com/Music4.ogg
Not entirely bad, but it seems a little random (both rhythm and melody wise). How did you go about composing this? What do you mean by "a system for making music"? Unless you are completely unmusical, finding a mathematical/logical "system" for composing music is generally not a good idea, in my humble opinion. :) Might as well let a computer generate the tune for you!
Now for the good crits! It has a nice semi-asian feel to it. The instruments work well together, and the structure of the song is pretty good. If you are new to music, this is a good start!
by system I mean that I have Think of one good tune (usually somthing that pops into my head) and put that on a midi maker, I then write verses in between the main part and add background interments. I don't really like the sound of midis so I use audiacy to make it sound more realistic.
It would be good ambient music, but I'm not sure it is entirely a 'tune'. Certainly not a theme tune.
It also seems disjointed, but you can work with this if you like.
Its more of the kind of think id expect to hear in a slightly spooky room of a game. I wouldnt want to hear it as a theme song.
It's pretty tough to critique this. If it's just something you want to slap on some game, ok. Otherwise, I dunno. The rhythm is all choppy and it hurts my ears to strain to understand it. Seems a bit loose and lacks direction in my opinion. Also the note combination at 0:25 doesn't work at all, I'd change it. Just my thoughts...