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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: [Cameron] on Fri 29/07/2005 12:59:29

Title: Thoughts and crits on story
Post by: [Cameron] on Fri 29/07/2005 12:59:29
Hey guys,
Been a while since I posted in crits I think. This is a story I wrote out on napkins because I had no paper. Tell me what you think and any crits you have.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21121842/


-Cameron
Title: Re: Thoughts and crits on story
Post by: deadsuperhero on Fri 29/07/2005 17:13:14
Very good!  :D