Thug Hide-Out

Started by DonB, Thu 02/02/2006 19:46:58

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i k a r i

it looks much better with that door, but is too perfect to be in a thug hide out...and too clean..
the grass is awesome..
Maybe you could make some grass in front of the character's feet and tail so that he doesn't look like if it were floating..

great job.. :o
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DonB

#21
Thanks for the compliment about the grass.. Increater tought me some skills with ArtGem.. its a great program for these kind of things..

The door maybe is too clean.. yeh.. your right.. I'm gonna make it more ruined by broken glass and stuff.. thanks..

Yeh the character of course will have grass for his feet.. but he isn't part of the background, it's just to give you an idea!


Uku

yep. its seems so cool, but i dont get what was wron with original grass-i liked it.

btw-InCreator!!!
PS!sorry for my english.

DonB

You liked the original grass more?

Drawken

Your background is really coming along.
Each time you make an edit you're always making drastic changes. It's great.
I love the grass and treetops, but having large textured areas like that make the non-textured areas look out of place.
I would texture the trunks, road, and shack to unify the background.
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Here's just a little edit I made.
- Changed the perspective of the center doorframe and window to match the perspective of the right doorway.
-Made it so the wood over the window has depth. Same with a few wood panels on the shack that overlap other boards.
-Added detail to the cracks.
-I also made a horizon, but I don't think it needs it now. In your first background the grassy space looked so naked. Now that you textured it, it looks so much better.
-I also brought down the shack a bit, but that's just a personal preference.
-Cruddy lighting.
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DonB

#25
That's great, i love it!..Ã,  you were very right in having the shack and trees being a little out of style now.. but with the little details like the coming-out-wood you made it works better.. also that trees walking away are master! thanks! I will fix it soon..

appreciated!

Uku

Quote from: DonB on Thu 09/02/2006 20:45:45
You liked the original grass more?

actualy... yes-looks simple to eye and good enough (imo)
PS!sorry for my english.

CaptainBinky

I like the style - it's cool. I have just one issue, and that's, er, aren't the trees awfully small? It's about the same height to the start of the foliage as one of your characters, and if you could imagine the image being extended upwards, the hut would probably be taller.

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