I've been working on titlescreen for a mobile shoot'em up last couple of hours. This is what I have so far:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/TITLE-PPC-final-version2.png)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/TITLE-S60-final-version2.png)
The rocket should be more crisp and metallic maybe... But I kinda like it this way. I don't know...
What do you say?
Looks great!
Only suggestion would be to add some reflection of the explotion to the front edge of engines and wings as well. Will make the explotion look bigger too.
Great work! (Too bad it's wasted on mobile shoot-em-ups... ;) )
I only see 2 dead links ???
'galatron' right?
I found it a little hard to read the name, took a while for me to work out wether they were a's or n's, i'd suggest putting the line across the middle of the a.
Well, It's good.
But I think that background distracts from title too much (which is not easily readable even without it).
I may suggest only bringing more contrast between bg and title, something like this...
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/TITLE-PPC-final-version2.png) -->(http://www.terran-x.com/increator/galatron.png)
Didn't notice it on your version, but now it also clearly seems that letter "R" is a bit too dark.
I agree about the words being hard to read. I felt like a retard looking at it that long.
"G-n-l-n...T-r-o-n... Is this even in English?..." :-X
If NOTHING else and if you're really keen on the design, maybe have like a white lazer animate through and make the middle lines for the A's.
Agreed, the 'A' is hard to distinguish. I was able to read the title well enough but that may be because someone else wrote it before I was able to see the pictures. Perhaps lengthening the diagonals of the 'A's' would be sufficient?
I like the darker re-touch for the background but maybe a compromise would work as the ship's a tad too dark. I like how the text looks in the lower version since it seems less squished. Very nice pic, reminds me of 90's style shareware shooters.
Hmm... I got the title at once. But then again, I owned a C64 once...with cracked games. :)
hahaha I didnt even try to read it I just glanced at the words and looked more at the picture! When i glanced i thought it said "SPbR" and then when i read your posts i realized. What might be making it confusing is that the letters are all the same size but you randomly change from upper to lower case.
I agree with ozwalled add a white lazer to make the lines for the A's.
Now on to the picture itself you see te trails from the rockets follow them and you see 2 rocks it kinda looks like he is shooting rocks, i'd move them slightly.