torture chamber, please help! (WARNING! Gore & nudity)- updated, now with Hell..

Fizz · Fri 13/08/2004 09:07:06

hey! I'm making this:

but i dont know what the hell to put on the walls! i thought of some coverts, and some windows... but thats boring. and for the cieling, i thought of ome medieval paintings of hell... i dont know... any suggestions? ive stared myself blind at this... thanks!

and, yeah, of course there will be some instruments :)its really just the walls that are bugging me. ill hang some instruments on there, but i would like some coverts as well... but then you wouldnt be able to get around for all the fun stuff... bleargh. im sorry if i offended anyone, that wasnt the point (not in here at least). its cover art for a friend of mine's black metal band called Spectral Mortuary.

again, sorry if i pissed anyone off

MrColossal · Fri 13/08/2004 09:12:00

i suggest a warning in the thread's title. some people may not want to open this image among certain company.

I'm sure DG agrees

Spoiler

tee hee

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viktor · Fri 13/08/2004 09:34:55

Hm...
I like your stile. Briliant picture.
I like the idea of the painting on the cealing. As for the wall how about puting some torture tools on them.

Nacho · Fri 13/08/2004 10:17:13

IMHO opinion, the p3n154 is too big for a dead man... :

Mr Jake · Fri 13/08/2004 10:25:43

you're just jealous.

I like the style, maybe you could put some posts up on the walls, or bared windows.

Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens · Fri 13/08/2004 10:36:27

You should look around for some weird gothic paintings that fit the angle and toss em in or something. This shot reminds me of an old style rpg for some reason, very nice.

Minimi · Fri 13/08/2004 10:38:33

farlander is right, the p3n1sh is too long, it has to be twice as short (well unless I layed there :

).....

medieval paintings on the wall would be great!

Chicky · Fri 13/08/2004 11:03:24

yeh, just for the stats i'd have to agree that the p3n15h is too big, kmon not only is it a 'cold day'. But the guys friggin dead, surley that would add to the shrinking of his err, penis.

Oz · Fri 13/08/2004 13:54:55

Very nice Fizz! How about giving the walls some texture? Brick? Or just some vague irregular pattern (if you want concrete). Cracks? Just something to break up the plainness. You could also try making the walls progressivly darker further into the room (away from the light sources). I think this would add more depth. Also, the field of view seems slightly stretched, but that doesn't really bother me. Other than that, you've got everything else covered. Very nice!

Andail · Fri 13/08/2004 13:56:12

do we really have to see the penis in the first place?

It's not like I'm offended by it or anything, it's just a pretty ugly detail.

YOke · Fri 13/08/2004 14:11:21

Penis, penis, penis!!!

The perspective of the two stone shelves on the walls is a bit off. The short ends should run horizontal, seeing as you're using one-point perspective. Right now they seem to tilt down towards the floor.

Maybe put some tapestries on the walls with hellish images? Some columns along the wall?

Great picture!

mätzyboy · Fri 13/08/2004 14:19:14

Where are the tools used to make the man suffer? I'd expect to see them in the torture chamber...

Haddas · Fri 13/08/2004 15:05:53

I did a small paintover. I didn't really put any effort into it, because I'm lazy. But I partially worked on the left wall. I tried adding water damage and oldness into the walls, but you probably get what I'm after.

jannar85 · Sat 14/08/2004 00:52:50

Hey, nice!
Why not do the same with the roof on the other side?
Just inverted colors. Looks a lot like Jesus!

I was going to comment on the floor, but it really is nice.
Sort of fits. Jannar likes.

Evil · Sat 14/08/2004 01:55:42

Yesm, add a blanket or cloth over his member and let it drape over the sides of the table.

I love the art on the ceiling, and the style in general. The stone tables, as said, are not in perspective.

In my opnion, I would add tapestries (spelling?), blood spots, grime as Haddas has shown, and some texture.

Anarcho · Sat 14/08/2004 03:24:47

I think it's kinda funny that this guy's dick is evoking such a vocal reaction among board members. I wonder if this largely male board would be telling Fizz to put cloth over this person's parts if it were large breasts or perhaps a vagina....

hmmmm.

I like the artwork! I hope you will be doing a similar hell scene on the other side of the ceiling?

Alynn · Sat 14/08/2004 05:03:13

I'm not gay or anything, but leave the penis alone...

Or for an even gorier detail... cut it off... and have a set of bloody bolt cutters hanging on the wall... muhaha!

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!

Moox · Sat 14/08/2004 05:05:44

add a severed hand under the table

Evil · Sat 14/08/2004 05:24:18

Quote from: ldw on Sat 14/08/2004 03:24:47
I think it's kinda funny that this guy's dick is evoking such a vocal reaction among board members.Ã,Â I wonder if this largely male board would be telling Fizz to put cloth over this person's parts if it were large breasts or perhaps a vagina....

We're just jealous as Hotspot said. Besides that fact, I think its the level of gore. If there was a woman with no top on but her guts were falling out I wouldnt find it "attractive". Nor a woman find this "attractive", but women dont usually have a thing for cartoon nudity.

Darth Mandarb · Sat 14/08/2004 05:39:36

I really like this image.Ã,Â It's horrible (in a good way).

I say leave the 'member' in the image!Ã,Â (perhaps blurring it out here is okay if it's offending some) but I think having it in the final will really make the image more 'uncomfortable'.

The guy's entrails are hanging out ...

The look on his face ...

The setting ...

It's all very creepy and totally sets the mood.Ã,Â Throw in a penis and it'll make it even more creepy.

Just my opinion.

edit - I decided to give it a go ...

- changed perspective (slightly) on pedestals
- darkened the whole thing (more eerie)
- added some detail to one wall (didn't do both - just to give the idea)
- added some pooling/draining blood under the table