(http://www.geocities.com/yufster/town.txt)
I know I have to put doors in, fix the windows and that awful patch of grass in the centre but.... What d'ya think? I just looked again... I'll also add shadows to create depth.
EDIT: Oh yeah, the tent is also gonna be fixed. Wish I'd actually thought of that before uploading it. Duh.
I like it! nice BG, the coloured glass windows in the church are really cool. But that is one HUGE tent, which wouldn't have to be a problem if it was a circus tent - but they have another shape :)
Really looking forward to your game.
it looks like night to the left and day to the right... because in my opinion, light from inside windows is not that noticeable if it's bright outside... so, no yellow light..
Oh that's okay, I didn't put the windows in yet :) Or the doors, I just put yellow cuz, you know, it's not white :D :D :D I'm gonna put some detail from the inside of the rooms in there, and curtains
Yufster - This has great potential! Keep it up.
The perspective is a little off, but that doesn't bother me with it. The shoe store building has a great 'feeling' of style to it! Keep up the texturing too ... it's off to a great start!
dm
EDIT
What is that large orange thing in the top/middle? Is it a tent?
Yes.... :( I can't really seem to find a way to make it more TENT LIKE. See it's supposed to be that shape. : /
It looks like a tent allright - it's just very big...
Apart from the occasional smudges near the church/shoe store.... it looks great!
My jaws hurt from grinning. I'm grinning like a monkey. I'm actually in pain from grinning.
So long as everybody can actually RECOGNISE the objects in the picture, it is surely game worthy!!!!
My jaw REALLY hurts.
I like it, but the only thing that got my attention was a stupid thing: On the banner above the shoe shop door, It says "Shoe Sale, 50% off marked" maybe add price to the end of it? Other than that, I loved it.