I need to know how does this look.

Icey · Sat 30/10/2010 16:19:00

This a Picture I made of my version of OSD. I needed to know how it looks before I add the eyes.

mode7 · Sat 30/10/2010 16:31:26

I think it looks quite good maybe you can add some shading later on. The ffx (?) guys hair should hve only one single color. But thats my only critic.

Icey · Sat 30/10/2010 16:35:28

Ok I will add shading later on. but the hair I cant really change that but it was still a good idea.

Anian · Sat 30/10/2010 19:03:27

The proportions are just off. Both of their legs are short and face are too wide. The part of his left arm below the elbow is too short as well, while on his right arm the part above the elbow is too short. The guy's belly button and maybe some muscle definition lines are missing.

Scavenger · Sat 30/10/2010 19:29:13

I think he needs more ridiculous hair. AFAIK, Dennis has these huge bangs, and toning it down just makes him look less like OSD and more... generic? I do like how you turned his shorts into a low cut brazier, though. That really shone through for me as part of the design. His gloves don't really fit (OSD wears bracers, after all), and the suspenders could use a little more tension in them. Right now they look like they're stuck to his chest. I know it's your version, but it helps to keep the iconic bits of the original design to make it more recognisable, even if you spin them in a way that makes them different (like the shorts-brazier thing.)

Icey · Sat 30/10/2010 19:42:02

I get what your saying. This OSD is a teen version of the real OSD but on a side note he really doesn't exist he is just a begin created by a crystal. at the end of the story he break the crystal thus taking him & all evil from reality. then in a land far a way he comes back as the original OSD but he has know memory of this past event.

Ponch · Sat 30/10/2010 21:06:41

Quote from: icey games on Sat 30/10/2010 19:42:02
I get what your saying. This OSD is a teen version of the real OSD but on a side note he really doesn't exist he is just a begin created by a crystal. at the end of the story he break the crystal thus taking him & all evil from reality. then in a land far a way he comes back as the original OSD but he has know memory of this past event.

That story idea is perfect for OSD.

Icey · Sat 30/10/2010 22:44:48

Thanx ponch.

Big GC · Sun 31/10/2010 01:57:54

Pretty good. Keep the short legs, it can be your character quirk.

Probably the girl just needs a penis or something, but should be fine