Adventure Game Studio

Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: on Sat 10/04/2004 21:59:42

Title: Umm not done with it
Post by: on Sat 10/04/2004 21:59:42
Needs some more stuff I think .. feel free to add to it and all add you in the credits :)
(http://www.zippyimages.com/files/811/right_side_street2.png)
Title: Re:Umm not done with it
Post by: Moox on Sat 10/04/2004 22:01:55
the cart next to the market looks like its floating
Title: Re:Umm not done with it
Post by: on Sat 10/04/2004 22:04:20
It does ? ummm
Title: Re:Umm not done with it
Post by: Moox on Sat 10/04/2004 22:15:21
try making the buildings longer, the carts as long as the entire building, that might help
Title: Re:Umm not done with it
Post by: on Sat 10/04/2004 22:18:22
The buildings look a little thing, the cart is half as long as the buildings. The far building looks like it's being overlapped by sky aswell. Although, I like the style, very clean and has potential. Good luck with it. :)

EDIT: Damn, LostTraveler beat me to it. :P
Title: Re:Umm not done with it
Post by: on Sat 10/04/2004 22:24:52
ya maybe all move it to the front  and it would look better .
Thanks for the help .