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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: evilspacefart on Sun 11/05/2003 21:38:05

Title: underwater location
Post by: evilspacefart on Sun 11/05/2003 21:38:05
Hi guys (and gals)

Underwater location for an underwater fish-detective game.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/underwater.gif)

I am really bad at shading...

edit:

slightly fixed

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/underwater2.gif)

Freddy Fish sounds like a cool name -- thanks Neole. I like it. Freddy Fish Jr.
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: AndersM on Sun 11/05/2003 21:40:22
Looks great -exept for the door.
The thick brown lines looks so different from all the other thin black lines.
Use those on the door too, and It will look great -whitout exepts...  
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: evilspacefart on Sun 11/05/2003 21:46:48
thanks. good point - the fat lines look out of place.
I'm also horrible with photoshop.
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: LGM on Mon 12/05/2003 00:03:21
I'd like to see that animated.
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: Neole on Mon 12/05/2003 02:10:30
Looks very cutesy quant - Love it! Love the game concept as well (sort of like Freddy Fish? Or whatsis name.)
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: Ishmael on Mon 12/05/2003 14:13:07
Great  :o! But with the ground shades in mind, I'd say thy buildings right side needs a bit more shadow... Dunno... But great work!
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: veryweirdguy on Mon 12/05/2003 16:27:36
I agree with the door & I think that there should be some light coming from the window (unless it's abandoned or something) but apart from that, great work!
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: evilspacefart on Thu 15/05/2003 11:54:15
fixed the pic a little. (check original post)
I'm using Quickplot to layout plot and puzzles
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: veryweirdguy on Thu 15/05/2003 16:13:09
That's even better, though I think that the lines on the door would look better black, to fit in with the rest of the pic.

As LGM said, some animated bubbles or something would be nice too.

Keep it up!!
Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: SLaMgRInDeR on Thu 15/05/2003 18:05:53
thats great, one point tho, i think with the door, if you put thin black lines instead of thin brown ones, atleast around the edge of it, it may look better.
Quote from: evilspacefart on Sun 11/05/2003 21:38:05
Freddy Fish sounds like a cool name -- thanks Neole. I like it. Freddy Fish Jr.
freddy the fish is the name of an already existing game. :-\
edit: woops, didnt realize wierdguy had already said it, i should realy read all the postst before i do! ::)
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Title: Re:underwater location
Post by: evilspacefart on Tue 27/05/2003 01:15:17
New screenshot of the main map.

http://www.geocities.com/evilspacefart/screens.html

More locations will be added as more locations are finished.
note: this is not a spongebob squarepants game, ok.

(hint to self: it is easier to use objects for locations instead of new map for each new loc. doh!)