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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: DanClarke on Thu 06/01/2005 00:08:19

Title: V. rough tablet sketch
Post by: DanClarke on Thu 06/01/2005 00:08:19
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/sun.gif)

just something i knocked up seeing as i got my new Mac. Comments appreciated.
Title: Re: V. rough tablet sketch
Post by: Haddas on Thu 06/01/2005 06:20:48
I love how the image is mostly composed of just shades of yellow. It seems very... sunsettingly, and happy.

Now the crits:
- If that is a forest beside the river, then the waves in the river are very large.
- The trees close to the cave-entrance are as big as and occasionally bigger than the trees in the forest.
- Is it a cloud at the mountain, or it smoking?

Love that picture
Title: Re: V. rough tablet sketch
Post by: Xadhoom on Fri 07/01/2005 02:53:12
Nice and expressive. Good stuff.
Title: Re: V. rough tablet sketch
Post by: on Fri 07/01/2005 16:34:57
Quote from: Haddas on Thu 06/01/2005 06:20:48
I love how the image is mostly composed of just shades of yellow. It seems very... sunsettingly, and happy.

Now the crits:
- If that is a forest beside the river, then the waves in the river are very large.
- The trees close to the cave-entrance are as big as and occasionally bigger than the trees in the forest.
- Is it a cloud at the mountain, or it smoking?

Love that picture

Thanks for the feedback, as for your crits:

-They're not waves it's the sun's reflection on the water
-Like i said it's V. rough
-Theyre clouds

;)
Title: Re: V. rough tablet sketch
Post by: Igor on Sat 08/01/2005 22:21:01
Classy! Love colors and the whole mood :)