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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: WHAM on Fri 08/07/2011 17:55:44

Title: Vehicles
Post by: WHAM on Fri 08/07/2011 17:55:44
This being the critics lounge, I guess you know what I want. Tear me a new one, will ya!?
This is my first pixellated vehicle, I drew it based on a 3D model of a van. Will post a second vehicle later this weekend.

(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/Van01.png)
(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/Van01.png)

EDIT: Heck, decided to add a version 1 of the other car as well. This is the one the main character drives, a -99 Peugeot 406. Why a -99 406 you ask? BECAUSE IT'S THE BEST CAR EVER! THAT'S WHY! SHUT UP!

(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/pogo01.png)
(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/pogo01.png)
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: NickyNyce on Fri 08/07/2011 20:05:04
Very nice, I like them, IMO if I were to change anything, I would make the two vehicles just a pinch bigger, the girl seems just a smidge tall for the driver side doors..

And maybe change the brake lights to red on top and yellow and white on the bottom

Otherwise, very nice WHAM
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: WHAM on Sat 09/07/2011 10:55:21
Little tweaking:
- Updated the taillights of the peugeot
- Made both cars just a tiiiny bit bigger
- Added dirty versions of both vehicles


(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/vehi02_clean.png)
(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/vehi02_clean.png)

(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/vehi02_dirty.png)
(http://whamgames.com/images/prototypes/vehi02_dirty.png)
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: NickyNyce on Sat 09/07/2011 18:45:12
Amazing what a little dirt can do, they look great
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: R4L on Sat 09/07/2011 18:58:27
Quote from: NickyNyce on Sat 09/07/2011 18:45:12
Amazing what a little dirt can do, they look great

Agreed. Wham it really is amazing how far your art has come dude!  8)
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: gameboy on Sat 09/07/2011 20:33:52
I would lose the black outlines on the van, probably change them to some mid-scale grey. Perhaps you could also do something with the wheels on both cars, draw some alloys or hub caps or whatever.

I'm not if the shading of the windows works, but that's a bit of gray area for me, so I'm not sure how to improve it.
Title: Re: Vehicles
Post by: WHAM on Sat 09/07/2011 20:42:16
I'll try out gameboy's idea of lightening up the black outlines of the van, as well as adding some detail to the wheels. Will probably post tomorrow.