Music critic needed...

deletethisprofile · Sun 14/05/2006 13:56:00

I have made a midi rather recently, but I can't anybody from
AGS IRC to criit it...

It has been uploaded to the 2adventure site -

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Pmdee1_0_Dee.mid

Please tell me what you think, I don't care if the critisism
or advice you give is sorta mean, I just need it to get some critism...

- Thankyou

ace monkey · Sun 14/05/2006 14:45:26

i'm guessing this is background music for a room? it's a good MIDI but i need more info as to wat's happening at the time or wat kind of room it's for to judge if it may fit.

deletethisprofile · Sun 14/05/2006 16:21:17

Well, to answer your question ace, I have created it for no other purpose than just to listen to, although It is a song I plan to use
for my games. And I feel that the song sounds like somthing you would here in an underground level, or a submarine level.

ace monkey · Sun 14/05/2006 17:51:11

sounds vaguely egyption-ish. this track could also be easily used in an opening credits/intro scene

LGM · Sun 14/05/2006 20:31:07

It's alright. I don't think the cymbal should be so prevalant.

cheeba · Sun 14/05/2006 21:48:58

Yeah, I quite like it, though I do think the cymbal needs to be toned way down, or maybe replaced with a softer style of cymbal. Otherwise, pretty decent.

deletethisprofile · Mon 15/05/2006 19:20:33

Ok, thanks guyz,
If any of you guys and gals are still paying attention to this forum
I was wondering if any of you thought that it could maybe be editted to make it sound better?
Maybe another instrument could be playing, or perhaps you tell me your thoughts on it being slightly longer?

eternal_renegade · Tue 16/05/2006 03:05:15

well that one long string you have playing is kind of annoying, it doesn't need to be that long so if you can shorten that, it would definitly sound better