A piece of music

[Eigen]

THIS is a litte piece I wrote for my band. We will burn it on a CD and when we play our gig, this intro thing plays before the actual song. I intended it to be really beautiful and well .. deep .. because the song itself is really not that sweet so it creates a kind of contrast. (You can hear a quick recording of the actual song titled 'Russian Roulette' in this mp3 file) But I feel that it's not beautiful enough or at least it seems to miss something ... or maybe I'm wrong. I don't know .. I'd love to see people really listen to it at shows and think "wow, this is sooo beautiful"

During this intro, we can set our instruments up and stuff like that. And then perhaps just stand and look thougtful, waiting to start rocking out. 8)

If anyone's interested making an edit, I can give you the midi file. (I converted the midi using soundfonts afterwards)
Thanks in advance!

Edit:  oh well ..


Please don't double post!

[bicilotti]

I don't like the theme much (a little too slow for me), but the developement is ok (expecially the electric guitar). Cut something from the first part imho

[Evil]

Intro's nice, little digitalish, but I'm sure sounds great live. When it gets heavy, the guitar is nice, but the drums pausing and stuff sounds weird. It's obviously not the whole song, but if it crecendos throughout the whole thing, and then got to that drum part that might not be bad. I really liked the simple drum beat from the beginning.

Though, I'm not really a fan of this style. To me it all sounds the same and too generic.

[Jay]

I just realized this is an old thread, but I must say, I really like the part at 1:45.
All this piece needs is some tweaking. I could be more detailed if you want, but I'm not sure if you still want crits on this relatively-old thread.

[flightlasvegasnevada]

I think it is a interesting tune, it is a good idea to allow people to use it.