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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Sam. on Fri 25/03/2005 22:02:36

Title: Web site image map
Post by: Sam. on Fri 25/03/2005 22:02:36
Okay folks. this is for my dads travel agency, when finished, it will have buttons on the "beach" with the different available locations. this is what i have so far. Its supposed to look proffesional, slick and very travel agency. Suggetions and paintover welcome.
(http://www.twin-design.com/fafmb/photos/gt.png)
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Sat 26/03/2005 04:53:59
I really like it, Zooty..The only thing that kind of confused me was the separation of sky/ocean..Maybe you could add some waves or clouds or something (and maybe some guy relaxing on the beach)?  Nice work.
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: Mr Jake on Sat 26/03/2005 11:39:51
I think if you knew flash you could make a pretty nice site with this background.
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: BlackMan890 on Sat 26/03/2005 15:39:53
Whops, i misunderstood what it said :p

i thought it said:
Spoiler
Gay Travel
[close]

had to check 2 times to be sure it isn't.

now to the Picture
Nice work but take these notes for me :)

1. remove the white outline on the trees, they make it look bad
2. don't fade from sand - blue, the ocean doesn't work that way Check this thread for information (http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=19965.0)
3. Add some depth to the sand and make it a little dirty :)
4. the leaves on the tree to the left is not suposed to go in the air, it is suposed to ge left - down, leaves just sort of hang in those trees
5. a cloud?
6. a sun?

well, i think this is it :D
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: Chicky on Sat 26/03/2005 15:50:12
Sounds like you've got something else on your mind, Goél.
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: Sam. on Sat 26/03/2005 15:52:57
heh, using my own work to show my faults, cheers goel, your suggestions really help.

Gay travel, you'd think i'd have heard that one before...
Title: Re: Web site image map
Post by: InCreator on Sat 26/03/2005 20:25:31
The sand blends into sea too much.