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Title: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Wed 24/03/2021 21:27:07
(https://i.imgur.com/Wx6jZyI.png)

It is mostly a collage. The rest was done in 2d painting (gimp)

I call it "Don't Leave Me".
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: Creamy on Wed 24/03/2021 21:34:09
Without colors and at this resolution, it's hard to form an opinion.

Sarlacc pit in front of stairs?
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Wed 24/03/2021 21:36:56
Something similar... It only exists in this scale - because the monster was mostly collaged-in (although altered to a significant degree; the original looked more like an angry ant :) ).

It's supposed to be something which keeps you in the basement, because it can't be alone.
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Post by: milkanannan on Thu 25/03/2021 05:04:01
Creepiness factor doubled when I realised it had eyes.
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Thu 25/03/2021 12:56:33
Quote from: milkanannan on Thu 25/03/2021 05:04:01
Creepiness factor doubled when I realised it had eyes.

They are very small, probably it is almost blind :)
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Post by: Blondbraid on Thu 25/03/2021 23:02:35
Some sort of centipede creature gaping at the onlooker?
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Post by: KyriakosCH on Thu 25/03/2021 23:23:16
Yes. It is blocking the ladder, so you can't leave the basement.
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Post by: milkanannan on Fri 26/03/2021 09:30:17
So why are we in the basement in the first place?
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Fri 26/03/2021 09:35:47
Quote from: milkanannan on Fri 26/03/2021 09:30:17
So why are we in the basement in the first place?

The price of curiosity  8-0
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: heltenjon on Fri 26/03/2021 11:16:17
Quote from: KyriakosCH on Fri 26/03/2021 09:35:47
Quote from: milkanannan on Fri 26/03/2021 09:30:17
So why are we in the basement in the first place?

The price of curiosity  8-0

SÃ¥ you (couriosity) killed the cat, went to the digital basement to bury it, and the way upstairs turned out to be bugged. 8-)
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Fri 26/03/2021 11:23:16
Sometimes you feel the need to retreat to your basement.
But you may never manage to return  (nod)
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: Mandle on Sun 11/04/2021 13:37:37
I like the feel of it as a memorable monster but the position directly in center frame feels a little deliberate and jump-scarish to me.
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: Danvzare on Sun 11/04/2021 16:34:09
Quote from: Mandle on Sun 11/04/2021 13:37:37
I like the feel of it as a memorable monster but the position directly in center frame feels a little deliberate and jump-scarish to me.
The scariest monsters to me, are always the ones you just barely notice at the side of the frame. Because it's like you're just noticing them from the corner of your eye.
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Mon 12/04/2021 08:06:38
The whole point is that it doesn't want you to leave, so it had to be visible.
That said... it's not like this is some masterpiece or anything  :=
I may try more stuff in the future, I am not good at this as things stand.
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: Matagot on Sun 25/04/2021 21:00:01
The most scariest thing about it to me is that I have absolutely no idea what it is, thus adding a kind of Lovecraftian vibe to it.

The creepiest monsters always tap into our sense of "What the...? This ain't right!"
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Post by: Fideos333 on Sun 06/06/2021 02:11:23
oh! I really like it!
As scary as it would be to find them in the basement, I kind of love them too. Like, I'd give them a hug and tell them how good they are <3
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Sun 13/06/2021 21:55:16
Thank you :)

Here is another attempt:

(taken out due to bad)
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: KyriakosCH on Mon 14/06/2021 21:01:20
It's that bad, huh? :(
Title: Re: What do you think of this sketch?
Post by: Gilbert on Tue 15/06/2021 13:18:19
I don't know what I'm supposed to see/interpret this as, but I think it's a tiny monkey shi... sitting on ET's finger.
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Post by: KyriakosCH on Tue 15/06/2021 17:20:19
Pretty much. Although it's not tiny nor a monkey, and that isn't ET.