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Community => General Discussion => Topic started by: Harvester on Fri 18/04/2003 01:18:24

Title: Another short short story by me
Post by: Harvester on Fri 18/04/2003 01:18:24
It's called The Perfect Murder. It's only one page long, and this is the unedited version. Well, read it or die!

http://a-janjic.freewebspace.com/murder.htm

Oh, yeah... Gonzo read the story and corrected some of the mistakes, but I'm too lazy to upload the new version yet.
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: Quickstrike on Fri 18/04/2003 01:23:48
Bravo!  ;D
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: Minimi on Sun 29/02/2004 00:21:38
fun story!  ;D
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: Gregjazz on Sun 29/02/2004 06:27:48
Lol, that's so funny!

My comment: how about "How many cases like this one has he solved? As a matter of a fact, a little less than one" rather than your "He solved over zero cases just like this one"?

Anyways, good work!
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: Peter Thomas on Sun 29/02/2004 07:46:18
haha! i found that funny for some reason (I mean REALLY funny. As in Laugh Out Loud kind of stuff). I know that it was meant to have SOME element of sardonic humour in it, but I might have been a little more zellous.

P.S Upload the new version NOW, my minion. I think I know the mistakes Gonzo would've pointed out, and it drives me NUTS to be reading this with the full knowledge that there's a perfect copy floating somewhere around your hard drive.... SO UPDATE NOW!  8)

Oh, one last thing... I'm really confused. What made anyone think that Douglason was the murderer. I mean really, come on. It's not like there was anything suspicious.....  :-*

EDIT: On a more serious note, can I ask about the title of the story? Why was it the 'perfect' murder? Maybe I'm just missing something...
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: Minimi on Sun 29/02/2004 08:34:01
whoahaha! Peter Thomas! Just take a look at the time of Harvester's posting?!! 18 April 2003 :P
Title: Re:Another short short story by me
Post by: veryweirdguy on Sun 29/02/2004 12:45:46
Then.............why did you bring it back from that period, Minimi?