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Title: I made a cartoon
Post by: HillBilly on Tue 17/03/2009 11:51:41
(http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3690/moose.png)

Hey,

November 2007 I started on a flash cartoon. February 2009 I re-discovered it and finished it. Too much was last minute and I wish I got the time to un-motion tween the first scenes, but overall it turned out fine for a few laughs I think. Then I submitted it to a Norwegian short movie competition and here it is:

http://www.nrk.no/p3tv/lookin-for-a-hand-out-amandus-2009/

If you like it, why don't vote for it? Press the purple button beneath the video where it says "KLIKK HER FOR Å  STEMME" and there you go. Thanks!


Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Ubel on Tue 17/03/2009 11:57:58
Haha, well that was... unexpected. Awesome job, man! :D
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Nikolas on Tue 17/03/2009 14:01:44
Very very cool! :)
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: DoorKnobHandle on Tue 17/03/2009 14:47:21
That was really great! You should send it to Comedy Central or something! :)
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Buckethead on Tue 17/03/2009 16:03:31
funny stuff! Perhaps a little too much gore in it. But I like gore so it's ok.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: ManicMatt on Tue 17/03/2009 22:06:20
You never seen Happy Tree Friends BucketHead? Youtube it.  ;)

That cartoon was frikking AWESOME!!  :D

I'm linking that to all my friend's on facebook.   :)
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: rharpe on Wed 18/03/2009 04:08:24
Pros: great design, nice animation, voice acting was ok, soundFX were well done, and the music was pleasant.

Cons: too much gore, disturbing humor, and really not that funny.

Recommendation: Play some Monkey Island games to help with your humor and keep trying.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: HillBilly on Wed 18/03/2009 07:37:27
Quote from: ManicMatt on Tue 17/03/2009 22:06:20I'm linking that to all my friend's on facebook.   :)

Cool! I'm glad most of you liked it.

And uh, thanks for the recommendation rharpe.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: DeviantGent on Wed 18/03/2009 17:57:46
Quote from: rharpe on Wed 18/03/2009 04:08:24
Recommendation: Play some Monkey Island games to help with your humor and keep trying.

As funny as MI is, I certainly wouldn't proclaim it to be the be-all-and-end-all with regards to humour.  I think this is more of the 'lolwut' school of funny.

As it stands, I liked this. Animation was top notch, looked very professional, and deliciously messed up. Nicely done HB.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: rharpe on Thu 19/03/2009 05:06:54
Quote from: HillBilly on Wed 18/03/2009 07:37:27
And uh, thanks for the recommendation rharpe.
No problem, anytime.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Trihan on Fri 20/03/2009 10:29:38
Like ManicMatt pointed out, rharpe, Happy Tree Friends is nothing but gore with no real humour in it and it's INSANELY popular.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: rbaleksandar on Fri 20/03/2009 12:25:32
:D This is like Happy Tree Friends ;D Noticed that the dude without hand has a tatoo "True Gangsta" on his right hand (the one that's not cut off). And the cat at the end - ??? ;D
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Neil Dnuma on Mon 20/04/2009 02:57:48
Congrats on winning the animation award! I watched the ceremony on television some days ago.

Well deserved!

(I hope it's ok to dig up threads when someone win awards and are on television)
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Ubel on Mon 20/04/2009 19:48:51
Wow, that's so cool. Congratulations!
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens on Tue 21/04/2009 01:14:29
Nice work, BillHilly!
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Moresco on Tue 21/04/2009 13:35:14
Well done, but really wasn't very entertaining.   Not even lolwut, that's reserved for the humor that is really awkward, like you need to cough or something - your body doesn't know what to do, because it's so unexpected or weird.  But the only close to funny moment for me was the fish (I think it was a fish) in the intro.  That was almost a lolwut...but then the blood shooting out of the arm moment was pretty much the norm from then on, so it wasn't really awkward anymore.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: rbaleksandar on Sat 25/04/2009 22:48:58
Congrats! (Little late I know, but... ;))
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Invalid on Sat 16/05/2009 22:27:35
lol "HELP ME! HELP ME!" good work very funny
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Ryan Timothy B on Wed 03/06/2009 03:19:50
I finally got a chance to watch this!

I really like your art style and the movie overall kept me pretty entertained.
The voices although were a little amateur.  Sounded like a cheap muffly mic.
I didn't find the comedy funny at all, but like I said, I was pretty entertained.  That is all that matters.
I wouldn't mind watching another video.  Keep making them.

Oh and the hand animations were absolutely great.  From the door bell to the radio knob, etc.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: HillBilly on Sat 18/07/2009 18:34:45
Sorry to dig this up but I just noticed all the replies after march 20. I just wanna thank you all for the comments.

Quote from: Neil Dnuma on Mon 20/04/2009 02:57:48
Congrats on winning the animation award! I watched the ceremony on television some days ago.

Well deserved!

Thanks! I'm amazed at how many people actually saw that. After I shaved my head the comments reduced.  :)

Quote from: theRedPress on Tue 21/04/2009 13:35:14
Well done, but really wasn't very entertaining.   Not even lolwut, that's reserved for the humor that is really awkward, like you need to cough or something - your body doesn't know what to do, because it's so unexpected or weird.  But the only close to funny moment for me was the fish (I think it was a fish) in the intro.  That was almost a lolwut...but then the blood shooting out of the arm moment was pretty much the norm from then on, so it wasn't really awkward anymore.

Why are people trying to define "lolwut".

Quote from: Ryan Timothy on Wed 03/06/2009 03:19:50The voices although were a little amateur.  Sounded like a cheap muffly mic.

I don't agree. The recording quality might have been a little low on some of the characters, but I think especially Edwood's voice actor sounded almost professional.

Quote from: Ryan Timothy on Wed 03/06/2009 03:19:50I didn't find the comedy funny at all, but like I said, I was pretty entertained.  That is all that matters.

Uh, ummm... hm.

Quote from: Ryan Timothy on Wed 03/06/2009 03:19:50I wouldn't mind watching another video.  Keep making them.

Oh and the hand animations were absolutely great.  From the door bell to the radio knob, etc.

Thank you.  :)

Just for the record, I learned today I was accepted to start studying for a bachelor degree in animation this fall. I'm pretty sure this toon scored me the seat. Woo.  :D
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: ambientcoffeecup on Sat 18/07/2009 22:09:59
If it was 15 minutes long it would fit nicely into an adult swim timeslot I feel. I actually thought it was pretty funny.
Title: Re: I made a cartoon
Post by: Paper Carnival on Sun 19/07/2009 06:01:09
I never said this before, but I really liked this cartoon. And I actually thought it was funny, too. Good luck with your degree and keep up the good work!