Critic my doodle..

[WaterCooler]

Any help with this?

http://xsurreal.com/head.jpg

Thanks...
(I do realize he is missing a body... heh heh..)

[m0ds]

Looks very good.

I moved this thread because this isn't specifically adventure related, and doodles aren't really appropriate in critics lounge.

[mätzyboy]

Hey, cool... I saw this thread being moved, without an explanation... I must have seen... a moderator AT WORK! What about this name change Mods? You've made even more music lately than usual?

Anyway the sketch is good. Reminds me of the style used in Lucky Luke somehow with that chin. Simple shading should make animation easy aswell. Id change the ear and nose a bit though..

A quick paintover. You could do better yourself, since you know your technique and thus do not need to imitate the line thickness and blurring like I did...