Ponder, me hearties (A treaty on morbidity)

[Andail]

I just wrote.
You can do the same.

http://www.esseb.com/andail/treaty1.doc

If you liked it, let me know.
Asch, who am I kidding

[Dmitri]

Why do we love radiation? Because it carries the image of your best friend - that image you took with your newly purchased mobile phone - to your second best friend. Who is just some hundred meters away.
    Like a the bald eagle of freedom the image hovers through the air and appears on a display seemingly unattached to your own; why? Because it can. Because you can. But somebody can even do it better. Go buy a new one.

lol! That's so ironic, I'm getting a new mobile for my birthday.

I'll just pretend you magically had me in mind when you wrote that passage.

Oh well, about the work as a whole, it seemed rather dark and introverted, I don't know how personal it was, or how much it meant. I liked it, but my opinion is a little biased since you're a friend and all. ^_^;

It didn't make much sense until the end, and the message you were trying to portray is a little unclear to me... I understand that the narrator was depressed because he lived around the aged and mentally unhealthy, and engaged in presumably sexual situations with women he didn't know. It does hint at a deeper message with passages such as the one I quoted above, and the piece overall displays your ability and skill with wordcraft.

I guess all I can say was that it was a nice piece of writing, although a little too disjointed for my tastes, judging it by it's merits I'd say you have one helluva short story.

[LGM]

* [lgm] prints

I will read as soon as I get to it.. Looks very promising