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Community => General Discussion => Topic started by: [Cameron] on Tue 21/12/2004 10:41:31

Title: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: [Cameron] on Tue 21/12/2004 10:41:31
Finally. Well, seeing this is the first issue I'd appreaciate any crits and comments you have about the magazine.
http://www.sitesled.com/members/chronicles/Xperience.pdf
Title: Re: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: jetxl on Tue 21/12/2004 12:20:30
Can anybody write something and send it to you?
Title: Re: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: [Cameron] on Wed 22/12/2004 01:15:09
Yep. Anyone.
Title: Re: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: big brother on Wed 22/12/2004 22:34:28
Not to sound overly harsh, but you should consider taking some writing classes before you appoint yourself editor of an eZine. I highly recommend reading Strunk and White's book, Elements of Style. It will teach you about the mechanics of grammar and the English language.
Another good book is Writing Fiction by Janet Burroway. She explores the construction of short stories and novels from character development to dialogue to description. Her approach is quite exaustive, and it's considered the definitive work on the subject by many university professors.
Title: Re: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: pslocum on Thu 23/12/2004 23:58:26
I have a story in here. It is therefore automatically FANTASTICAL.
Title: Re: Xperience - The virginal issue
Post by: Developer on Sat 25/12/2004 01:02:21
Love the theatre article.