Hand drawings - just want to know what you think

[Nine Toes]

These are some drawings I've done with those cro-magnon tools known as a pencil and paper.  (Sorry about the notebook lines.    For some reason, I just prefer and draw better on notebook paper.)

Some character portraits I was drawing for an RPG-type game:


A werewolf:

*I didn't actually draw this one all by myself, I saw it in a book, and then redrew it.

A tatoo I drew for a friend, and a random design:


Some zombies:


Just want to know what you think.  Comments?  Suggestions?

[Gilbert]

Nice sketches , just my own feelings:
1st image:
- the skull man (from He-man? ): maybe you can shrink the skull a bit or make it less "broad"? I think currently the skull looks a bit fat, that looks as if there're fresh stuffed inside of it, or looks as if it's a helmet put on top of a standard human head (unless that's intentional).
- vampire: scary, maybe you can exagerate a bit more and make his teeth longer
- girl: the lower half of her body looks a bit flat, maybe you can move the spot where her arms crosses a bit to the right.
- "hairy" man at the bottom: interesting hairs , only crit is that I think you can make the hairs of his sideburn sticks more out of his face lines, so they don't look like sticken flat on his face.
Werewolf:
- Looks GREAT, but it's probably because you drew it too light or the scanner, the colours are not dark enough to see the details clearly.
Tatoos:
- AWESOME, no comment here.
Zombies:
- left one: maybe you can add a few hairs like the right one, also, as a zombie, I think his suit is too clean or too "intact" (again, unless it's intentional)
I think you can also add some "holes" on the zombies' skins, revealing fresh and better, add some worms.

[RoboPenguin]

Wow, all of them are pretty damn awesome. A few crits though:

The skull on the first dude looks a bit elongated, it kinda sticks foreward.
Same for the woman. Also, her dress shouldn't be that symetrical at the bottom from that angle. I think the right eye (viewers left) is a lottle too slanted on the hary guy, but that's just being picky.

The werewolf just rocks. No crits for that.

Really like the tattoo design, I'd have that painted on me anyday.

The left zombie looks like james bond risen from the dead... In a good way. The srawing is realy neat and tidy and looks like it was drawn to be inked. The one to the right I don't like as much, I think it's the mouth, but somthing just dosnt look right about him.

As I say, awesome drawings, keep it up!