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Author Topic: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language  (Read 2042 times)

WIMD is an oldschool adventure game. The world of WIMD is completely crazy and funny. (laugh)
(The title of the game is also deliberately absurd);-D

You follow the investigation of Detective Pigeonmoche, journalist Simon Geremy, and Chef Georges. Humor and wacky situations ! (roll)



Link in GameJolt : http://gamejolt.com/games/white-is-mode-dead-episode-i/27966
Link in AGS : http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/site/games/game/1940/
Link official topic (French) : http://adventuregamestudio.fr-bb.com/t2350-white-is-more-dead-episode-i-ii

The game will have several short episodes. Episode-2 is already available, but only in French for now (link)

I hope you like it. Be indulgent, it's my first play. :-[

(Be indulgent also with my English, lol)

Re: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language
« Reply #1 on: 15 Jul 2015, 01:55 »
I downloaded and played the game.

Overall it's a pretty good game. There's a good mix of puzzles using inventory items and dialogue and possibly some humour in there as well.

A few comments:
- The intro video did not play for me. I was only able to play it by launching it from the game folder.
- For the next game, I recommend reducing the number of icons down to the commonly used left click to use, right click to look. Gameplay was a bit awkward having to click the icons especially with a separate icon for take/open and use/open.
- Most important: if you are going to make more games, please have the English translation reviewed by a native English speaker. It's not just important to have proper spelling, grammar and punctuation, but I was unable to understand much of what was being said because of the poor English.

Looking forward to the next game

SHADOW

Re: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language
« Reply #2 on: 15 Jul 2015, 15:42 »
- The intro video did not play for me. I was only able to play it by launching it from the game folder.
It's strange ... I have not had this problem before.
- For the next game, I recommend reducing the number of icons down to the commonly used left click to use, right click to look. Gameplay was a bit awkward having to click the icons especially with a separate icon for take/open and use/open.
Yes, I also found this problem. For episodes 1, 2 and 3, it will not be changed because I want to keep a "graphical consistency." But then I'll be more careful with the interface.
- Most important: if you are going to make more games, please have the English translation reviewed by a native English speaker. It's not just important to have proper spelling, grammar and punctuation, but I was unable to understand much of what was being said because of the poor English.
Yes, it is difficult for me. I translated the first tier of the game. Then a member of the French forum translated the following. I finished the last part of the game. It's complicated to find someone to translate a game... :~(

Thank you very much for to have playing at my first video game! ;-D
« Last Edit: 15 Jul 2015, 15:44 by chefgeorges »

Re: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language
« Reply #3 on: 15 Jul 2015, 15:57 »
- The intro video did not play for me. I was only able to play it by launching it from the game folder.
It's strange ... I have not had this problem before.

I played it in fullscreen mode. When played in a window, the video did play.

- Most important: if you are going to make more games, please have the English translation reviewed by a native English speaker. It's not just important to have proper spelling, grammar and punctuation, but I was unable to understand much of what was being said because of the poor English.

Yes, it is difficult for me. I translated the first tier of the game. Then a member of the French forum translated the following. I finished the last part of the game. It's complicated to find someone to translate a game... :~(

Maybe now that it's released on the English forum you can get help from English speakers for the next games?

SHADOW

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Re: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language
« Reply #4 on: 31 Jul 2015, 13:04 »
Hey

You probably want to add two screen shots before the mods see this thread. ;) In fact am amazed they missed it.
Also, do you have a mirror for gamejolt? My browser doesn't like gamejolt. :-\

As for finding an English editor for your game, just post on the recruitment section, am sure someone will soon volunteer for the job. :) Good luck!
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Re: White is more DEAD - Episode I - French/English language
« Reply #5 on: 31 Jul 2015, 13:58 »
You probably want to add two screen shots before the mods see this thread. ;) In fact am amazed they missed it.
The "2 screenshots" rule is for Game In Production forum.
Completed Games rule sais:
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Try to include at least ONE screenshot.
Note the "try": this means that screenshot is desirable but not obligatory.
« Last Edit: 31 Jul 2015, 14:00 by Crimson Wizard »